"Come forth"
I got up and started
Towards the voice
Eerie in the dead of the night
Like damp fingers
The coldness clutched me
Felt the shiver rise up
my spine
hairs on my neck
turned straight
And from the darkness
Came the skythe
shining in black
Robes whirling
As I looked into
The face of death
Image from here
I got up and started
Towards the voice
Eerie in the dead of the night
Like damp fingers
The coldness clutched me
Felt the shiver rise up
my spine
hairs on my neck
turned straight
And from the darkness
Came the skythe
shining in black
Robes whirling
As I looked into
The face of death
Image from here
2 comments:
very nice.can picture it happen in my heart. but i think there is something odd in:
"hairs on my neck
turned straight"
it sounds like either the hairs were first curly and then turned straight, or they were gay and became straight (repenting when death came? lol). how ever, i think u meant to say something like :
"the hairs on my neck :stood straight" , or "stood up straight"...or whatever. see,im not very good in this, maybe u can think of something good.or am i being stuhpid here?
dude; long time no see, see time no tea, where the fuck have you been.
well what you say is true...but i dont know the right word and you know how difficult it is to right down everything when it suddenly comes out pouring and you dont find the right words...well i have been at home...wait till next month...hehe
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